Our Pitch

Pitch A: A bookbag for a seemingly nice high schooler is left behind. Another student finds the bag with intentions to return it, only to find a shocking secret revealed in the journal.

Pitch B: Two masterminds plan a robbery from a nice friend group. Trust is altered as one betrays the other in the final process.

Pitch A: This idea caught our interests as the audience wants to be engaged in the process. Suspense is heightened as the findings in the journal identify the observation of students analyzed from the nice quiet kid. The audience will began to question one another on two possible options. Will the findings will be revealed? Or will the student return the bag and notebook like nothing happened? 

Pitch B: This pitch highlighted the importance of watching your back. Two friends plan to rob a friend group they are interest in joining, while one has their own intentions of manipulating the plan. This comes as a shock as the assumed robbers are good friends and no one expects the sudden betrayal. This evokes emotion aspect as many viewers experienced betrayal at least once in their lives. Will the plan be successful or a failed mission in the end? That will be the main topic of the audience during screening. 

Our final decision: On the popular vote, we chose pitch B because a better plot as two wrong actions are being preformed. Not only is it wrong to steal, but it is also wrong to break trust of another close friend.